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Collab - Harajuku 1 by *jeffsimpsonkh:iconjeffsimpsonkh:

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Another collab with I'l be doing a guy next...to go with this.

Lines are here: [link]

Colours by me!
I'm not...TOO happy with it, somehow I think it dosn't have any depth or..or something, I dunno maybe I've just been looking at it too long. I love the lines though =p

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~Juno-Gemini Nov 25, 2005, 10:12:07 AM
maybe a little more shadowing in the clothes might help? i think it looks good, nice and colourful

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~mUse-less Nov 25, 2005, 10:32:09 AM
you've done so well with the colouring, congrats :hug: if your looking for a tip, perhaps don't be afraid to go even darker with certain parts of your shadows? up to you ^^ my colouring abilities aren't perfect so whether you care what i say is up to you =D i still think it's great
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*Dimkas Nov 25, 2005, 10:39:28 AM
Just a suggestion here --I think you did an amazing job in the colouring department and the same goes for papersun linewise. How about cropping the details coming out of the frame? It could be that the depth perception is lost because of the elements popping out of the frame from different depths simultaneously.
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~Vongchild Nov 25, 2005, 1:31:38 PM
I think the depth is lost because she looks superimposed on the background. Otherwise she's very cool! I love her outfit - Harajuku is the best!
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~Vongchild Nov 25, 2005, 1:32:05 PM
I think the depth is lost because she looks superimposed on the background. Otherwise she's very cool! I love her outfit - Harajuku is the best!
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~whalewithlegs Nov 25, 2005, 10:48:20 PM
also, there doesn't seem to be any use of warm-cool value to emphasize depth, and the superimposition may be due to palette variety, though it is not really a negative effect.
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*cypherx Nov 26, 2005, 4:04:29 AM
loads of colours, which I like, but look at the bottom left part of the image, there's a black line leftover
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`alchemism Nov 26, 2005, 7:43:00 AM
This reminds me of Japanese photographer Shoichi Aoki.
His direct portraits of Japanese ultra-pop culture are very similar.
Our gallery is his Canadian representative. Nice work.

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~Splic Nov 27, 2005, 2:28:43 PM
I love the style, and the colours you did are amazing!

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